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Haunting Naomi

Paranormallast updateLast Updated : 2021-12-09

By:  Jason BoyceCompleted

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Haunting Naomi NEW CHAPTERS UPLOADED DAILY Naomi is a sixteen-year-old girl who was just living an ordinary teenage life. One night she heard a thumping inside her home that occurred every sixteen seconds. The thumping never left or stopped and only intrigued Naomi more to investigate. The noise will lead to her death and the afterlife, not to mention horrible terrors that Naomi will never forget. Can Naomi overcome the source of the thumping and conquer the evil that awaits? Will she make the most of her death and determine how to save herself, her family, and her best friend? Death cannot stop a determined young lady. https://www.goodnovel.com/book_info/31000012310/Paranormal/Haunting-Naomi https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bziuIrfxqrA

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Chapter 1

Prologue

My writing style:

I am a firm believer in the 'keep the dialogue simple' method.

Instead of saying, Jennifer screamed and excitedly yelled, "...", I prefer to write like the professional authors' and use my text prior to the dialogue to indicate what she is feeling. Therefore, I write dialogue as 'he said, or she said'.

I do not like the way it reads but that is the first thing an editor looks for when editing a book.

This story:

This story (Haunting Naomi) is based on true events. Now, obviously I am a 37-year-old man and I have never experienced anything like what my story entails but the thumping sound that is constantly referenced in my work happened to me one night on a sixteen second interval. That was all it took to bring this tale to life.

Feedback:

I welcome ALL feedback. If I put something that does not make sense or something that just does not flow with the story as a whole, PLEASE feel free to message me on Facebook or anywhere you can find me. I do not take offense and will correct anything the reader wants to keep them engaged and to keep the story cohesive.

Finally:

Thank you for taking the time to read this work. I wrote chapter 5 last night (2/20/2021) and it literally took fifteen minutes. After I finished, my body and mind were severely drained. I had frightened myself and upset myself with what took place. That is what I want to happen with ALL my works. I want to feel emotion, even as the author, because I know you as the reader will feel that same emotion, only magnified to a greater extent.

Please check out my other works.  'The Christmas Darling' won an award even though it was not "good" enough to earn an exclusive contract on GoodNovel, I still have it in a shadow box above my computer telling me that I am good at what I do, and it motivates me to continue to push the limits.  One day you will see my name as one of the best authors of our time.  I can promise you that.

I love you all and appreciate you.

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    • Veliciah

      10

      This story deserves more love~

      2021-10-16 02:08:23
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    • Superovkata

      10

      I love your writing! Give me more :)

      2021-07-24 05:43:18
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    • latisshap

      10

      you are phenomenal. love this book

      2021-07-12 08:00:25
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    • bripeterson157

      10

      what a work of art you have created. I love it and I am routing for naomi.

      2021-07-12 05:46:54
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    • qbee76485

      10

      Absolutely fantastic writing.

      2021-07-12 05:07:02
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    • latisshap

      10

      never ever stop. this is the best writing and story on this app.

      2021-07-11 04:09:45
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    • bripeterson157

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      love love love you! never ever stop writing.

      2021-07-11 02:29:05
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    • bripeterson157

      10

      best author on this barely tolerable app. they have way too many lame stories on her.

      2021-07-11 01:53:08
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    • qbee76485

      10

      absolutely the best author on here. enough of this BS romance and werewolf stuff. quality writing with a quality story.

      2021-07-11 01:51:40
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    • bripeterson157

      10

      pure joy reading this story. you write well and I love it.

      2021-07-10 02:36:34
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    • qbee76485

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      Absolutely fabulous how you have transformed this story. keep pushing. You'll be a real published author one day.

      2021-07-10 01:50:08
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    • Blentkills

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      You have been doing a great job!!! Keep it up!

      2021-06-23 10:47:56
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    • Jason Boyce

      10

      We have successfully hit our stride. The goal is 200k words. A couple more months. Keep buying chapters and unlocking. This thing does not stop dropping jaws and slaying demons.

      2021-06-13 10:05:26
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    • Jason Boyce

      10

      Part one finishes releasing on Sunday. Part two will begin the first week of May. Hope you are enjoying it.

      2021-04-24 01:25:48
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    • Jason Boyce

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      We are just now getting started with the gore and really breaking down the story. Hope you are enjoying.

      2021-04-11 05:20:38
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    Chapter 9
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